mythicaldamienne opened this issue on Jun 20, 2003 ยท 11 posts
dialyn posted Fri, 20 June 2003 at 1:11 PM
In the context of the poem, I thought your meaning was quite clear. It wouldn't have occurred to me to deduce the alternative meaning...the image was very clear in my mind. But this certainly shows how differently the same words can strike different people depending on their backgrounds. On the other hand, I don't think you can be creative and write for an unknown censor at the same time. just my opinion, fairly meaningless.