The poses are great. So are the background, clothes and textures. The sky could be have more drama maybe. And you might want to add a tiny reflection to that sword. Like a little cross/star-type reflection. You could do that in post. I'd look at the lighting too. And I'd raise her clenched fist so it's a bit more visible. It's a dramatic gesture, but doesn't catch the eye at first, since it kind of blends into her arm. But... if it was my scene... what I'd try is a really wild camera angle. Like from somewhere down near his right hand, with a wide lens, like 15mm, so she's really jumping down onto him. Or anyway, somewhere from below. Thing is, you'd lose a lot of the guy's pose, but it could be a nice alternative. But that's me. I like dramatic stuff. mac