FearaJinx opened this issue on Jun 28, 2003 ยท 11 posts
jstro posted Sat, 28 June 2003 at 10:12 AM
Some details would help. There is no motor, so some oars on the boat (though they could be stowed). The turbulance of the water needs to be greater, especially for the one that has landed. And even though he's not airborne there sould be some disturbance from the third one. And the third one does need to be a bit smaller. Nice scene overall. I like the colors of the sky and their reflection in the water. jon
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