Forum: Bryce


Subject: June Entry FINAL, at last *sigh*....

Zhann opened this issue on Jun 28, 2003 ยท 31 posts


TheBryster posted Sun, 29 June 2003 at 12:53 PM Forum Moderator

This is a truly great picture. I'm very impressed with your work, Zhann. No kidding. I do,however have a couple of personnal niggles if you will permit me....? I think the lady on the rock needs to be pointing and looking at the monster as if she is conjoring it up out of the depths. Her light might benefit from a touch of lense flare, although the blue is a nice shade.. The monster itself looks old - was that intentional? I say this because the arms look kinked, almost arthritic...if that was your intent then fine, I would have smoothed out the arms to look stronger/more detemined. After a few moments study I noticed the water pouring off the beasty's arms...very nice touch... As for the sea and sky.....what can I say....they are simply perfect. I've seen the ocean in this state and it's terrifying! You have caught it exactly! You're just too good for this place.... Go away and make some other forum despair! ...:-) The Bryster

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