Yes! Such an attractive scene. I thought this was very pretty the first time around, and you did indeed improve upon it. As a very minor observation, the lower half of the gorilla, especially to the right, appears to be missing. I know this is only an illusion, and am not sure if it really matters, but perhaps if you could see a bit more of the animal's legs or hindquarters, or if there was another bit of vegetation to cover that space, the anomoly wouldn't catch the eye. I really like how the water doesn't call too much attention to itself. The color, turbulence, and reflection look juuuuust right. Great work!