Forum: Vue


Subject: Murder- Please crique!!!

FearaJinx opened this issue on Jul 07, 2003 ยท 8 posts


runwolf13 posted Wed, 09 July 2003 at 1:45 PM

I love the concept. Here are my suggestions More broken things. Clearly this was a violent murder. A chalk outline, such as the police have already come and gone? A broken window. Add to the drama. lower the viewing angle, it'll make it look more ominous. Great job!