Forum: Photography


Subject: Girls Part II - FeDe(2)

Artax opened this issue on Jul 22, 2003 ยท 6 posts


DHolman posted Tue, 22 July 2003 at 10:35 PM

Your mother was a hamster and your father smelled of elderberries!! Oh, you mean critiquing the photos. Sorry. :) I don't have time right now for a full critique, but I want to say I love shot #2. The motion, tones and form are excellent. I especially love the facial expression. Tones seem a bit weak in the 1st and 3rd one. Hair seems overexposed and distracts me a bit. I really like the face on the 3rd shot too. I'm reading it as playful and a little devilish. I'm wishing the hair was better exposed (more like her top). But that may have been what you were going for. I've never gotten high-key to work for me, so I don't know how valid the above is. :) -=>Donald