Forum: Poser - OFFICIAL


Subject: The pic I re-did based on all advice...new opinions pls :)

dlk30341 opened this issue on Aug 02, 2003 ยท 12 posts


Mason posted Sat, 02 August 2003 at 9:41 PM

Nice pic. My nit pick would be to make an effort to pose the hands. I think the flat hand poses really kind of kills the mood of the pic and makes it look 3d. Also play with the guy's legs a bit. No two body parts should ever be parallel unless the person is laying dead in a morgue on a slab. He looks like a big brawly guy but he's sitting like a woman. One thing is to put a body part to use, as is in real life. That right hand is doing nothing so do something with it. Maybe spread his legs and bend him over and change his right arm so he's leaning the arm on his knee and bending toward the girl. I assume he's handing her a soda (or beer if you're in Alabama :). Oh wait. It must be Alabama cause that is a Budweiser. Never mind. Also the lamp post is lost in the trees. you've got open dead area to the right. Maybe fill up that blank space with the post so people can see it. You could also use the post to cover the harsh horizon line where the grass ends. Birds are nice.