It is getting good :o) when that is said I must agree to most 0f what SamTherapy said, the dirt doesn't really look like dirt. Did you paint it on the texture or on the picture? The coke lid and cigarette pack IS out of scale, partly my fult, some of my early props are HUGE, my apologies :o) You need to get some shadows too, but I am the first to admit that Poser's lights and shadows are HARD to make good looking, that's usually my weak point in my pictures. I really like your room and the benches are a great touch. You're absolutely on the right track. Oh and Victoria is slow rendering, and her hair even worse. That's normal :o)

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