Hmmmmm... it is missing something. I agree with a few of the above, mostly with the water. I agree that it could maybe be less reflective, and more blurry. Perhaps adding a little more of a tannish hue to it to make it look dirtier. Also, I think that the bump on the water looks a little unnatural. Your elephants, although they are superb metaballing, are all different sizes, yet the water line comes up to the same spot on the younger ones as it does on the much larger, older ones. Maybe lower the smaller elephants down a bit??? Great start however, and excellent theme!!! I really think you can improve it!! brholte (Benjamin Ross Holte)