I think a lot of us here can relate to the poem in one way or another. You do a good job in rhyming. I didn't even see the rhymes the first time around. (That's a good thing, to me. In-your-face rhymes drive me nuts.) It'll be interesting to see your picture for the poem. With the background you gave, I have an image in my mind. It'll be fun to see how close or how far away I am from your picture. Cheers!