This looks cool as it is.... However I do agree that something mid screen would give a nice focal point. Don't get rid of the fog.... it gives it a super mysterious feel to this image. And you are right in saying that this image has some potential... It has lots of potential. Looks great so far. I am sure anxious to see the new render you have going when it is done. The black and white idea could really add to this. Nice work Doug. 8)

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