I would delete the pocket from his robe (if it is a separate object from the rest of the robe), it somehow looks out of place. Great start!

This is not my "second childhood". I'm not finished with the first one yet.

Time flies like an arrow; fruit flies like a banana.

"I'd like to die peacefully in my sleep like my grandfather....not screaming in terror like the passengers on his bus." - Jack Handy