Forum: Bryce


Subject: wip, september challenge... I can't see straight. *lol*

brittmccary opened this issue on Sep 15, 2003 ยท 11 posts


Zhann posted Mon, 15 September 2003 at 11:10 PM

You're on the right track, few suggestions, -water flowing down the middle of the street, not alot, but the street was the basic sewer system and would always be somewhat wet, (from emptied bed pans), -more and larger rubbish, the streets are way too clean, the rats are a nice touch, but slighter larger and black (the color of the common european rat), -big large bluish black patches on the dead, -the helper would be in dark clothing or at least a robe like the other figure, this was a dirty job so they wouldn't be that clean, if it's a woman definitely dark clothing, big skirts, shawl, the hem of their clothing would be soiled from walking the dirty streets.. -and the buildings would be grimy and stoot covered with much smaller windows...

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