I think that the figures look great, the eyes are perhaps merely too ambient? The female's eyes seem to almost glow. Perhaps turn the ambience all the way off... Or try skipping out on Poser mats for the eyes, and use procedurals... But what really strikes me is the lack of eyelashes. Nobody has such short, thin eyelashes, except burn victims and weirdo goth kids. I was looking at my lover the other day, she has long, thick eyelashes and she doesn't even wear makeup! They really stand out, I love it. Just an idea!