I'm writing this response before reading anyone else's, so as to avoid any influence on my comments. My eye is drawn to the bolts left of the center of the wheel. I think it has something to do with the shadow line across the top of the image and the framing by the wheel and struts. I like this image better than the first. A note (and if anybody else has said the same thing, sorry for being reduntant), the texture on the pipe still feels a bit stretched to me. I like the fact that the spider web is partially hidden in shadow, and I love the pressure gauge in the BG. Nice improvement. OK, now I'll read everybody else's comments!