In any shooting session I take many (most!) tries that just do not "work." Not necessarily anything "wrong" with them; just for some reason they lack something. I also do not like to crop from the original composition; never as sharp and detailed as the full frame. With the wonderful light and rythms in this scene there are several opportunities for cropping. I like yours the best; it does look like your style. Here are two of my quick attempts. [I see at least one other possibility, but no time this morning...]. The exercise of looking for crops does help to improve field composition. Thank you for sharing the exercise.