Forum: Writers


Subject: Please critique...Dilectus Meus Me et Ego Illi

Muna opened this issue on Nov 05, 2003 ยท 5 posts


Muna posted Fri, 14 November 2003 at 9:54 AM

~smacks forehead~ I see what you are saying, and yes I do have a tendency to wander (a bit) with past and present tense. I truly do appreciate your input, and very much so your critique is helpful. Thank you again! ~smiles~ Lourdes aka Muna