Forum: Writers


Subject: Working on t-shirt slogan (short!) -need reactions.

lavender opened this issue on Nov 08, 2003 ยท 18 posts


lavender posted Sat, 15 November 2003 at 8:05 AM

Very poetic, Mestophales! Although I think it sounds more like a song lyric than a T-shirt slogan. I keep hearing it with an electric guitar back up though, which is a little innapropriate considering that it talks about being accoustic. Obviously I need to work on that.