Move the camera a little more to the right and lower. Really fun idea. You may want to find and add a search light or construct a simple gadget from primatives as the source of red light.

Funny idea... excellent execution. Only one critique: You might use a less reflective coating on the APC, those are usually painted to cut down on glare and reflections to keep them from being spotted. Unless of course it's an anti laser coating, in which case, ignore me. Cheers and good job.

Find a way (post production maybe?) to put the moons above the cloud layer. Those moons are probably many hundreds of thousands of miles away, but they look as if they are only a few thousand feet up because the clouds are behind them. Locke

Cool idea. I think you do need to have something to show where the red light's coming from a bit better and as for the moons: Instead of using a fog or cloud layer, create some spheres and give them cloud textures. That way you can put the moons behind them in Bryce without post production. Good work...for a "newbie" :> -Teyon