Forum: Writers


Subject: Long time no see, eh? A new poem: "Ignorant"

Ianfe opened this issue on Nov 03, 2003 ยท 15 posts


tresamie posted Thu, 04 December 2003 at 1:41 AM

Hi Ian, I like this a lot. I've been pondering the meaning of 'break' here, and perhaps it will work better if you change it to: Who sorts them? I do not know. This unknown shepherd will not come for me. HTH, Tres

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