Hi Jody! I think your picture is going to look quite cool when its finished. Now, youve probably already thought of this but since you wanted comments... you got them... The girl is standing next to a black screen. Is there going to be anything on that screen later? Maybe a commercial of some sort? The city is a bit too dark, I think. It looks like nobody lives there at all yet it appears to be a city that should be teaming with life. But as I said before, youre not finished yet. Please contact me when you are. Live well.. /Jacko