I have to agree with an above remark...I think a darker (or kind of a sunset sky) would have added a bit more drama to the scene (and perhaps fit in with the color scheme well). Only other thing is I can't take my eyes off the guys mouth. I'm supposing those are teeth but I keep thinking he's sucking a ping-pong ball or something. Aside from that, I think it's darn good! I think I should go delete my first attempts...this puts most of my work to shame. Great job on the fire and smoke!