This is going to sound very mean, but it is contstructive criticism:
How NOT to get vistors to your site:
- Host on GeoCities, Angelfire, or any site that forces pop-up windows on visitors. While visiting three pages on your site, I received one pop-up on the main page, one pop-up on the Downloads page, one back on the "main page". I hope your "free" site is worth annoying visitors.
- Make sure NOT to put any instructions on your home page. All I see is a huge graphic, a "Online" button, a counter, and a few Bravenet links. Is this your entire site? What should I click? Why should I click? How do I know if there is anything here that will interest me? Whoops, times up. I'm bored. Nothing of interest here. Next site.
- "Site under contruction". Did you know that it takes almost the same amount of time to make a page that says "under construction" than it does to make a fully working page?
- I'm glad that everything in your store can be paid for in money order, but it would be a tad nice if the link for the store actually worked. Yes, I know the site is under construction, but why put a graphical link on the site if it doesn't work?
- However, you do get points for not taking visitors to a "page not found" page.
- And to really, really nit-pick: you say you are in "college", yet you misspell the word "please" (you spelled it without the last "e"), the word "suggestion" (in your main-page blurb) is spelled with two "g"'s, and "their" (also in the main-page blurb) is spelled "their", not "thier". People may conclude that you either can't spell or that you are too lazy to check the spelling.
Maybe other people won't point these things out, but they do register subconsiously with people. If a site has misspellings or links that don't work, people become frustrated and leave... and may not come back.