What everyone else said,.... Also, what's with the big gapping black hole right in the middle. I also realize that it is possible that you have cropped this to get it large enough for us to see the details but the way it is now you have your type going right up to the bitter edge of the image. I don't think the selection of font in the title treatment are doing much to add to the image. Instead of using some basic gradiant and relying on the 'coolness' of it (or lack thereof) to pull off the title, why not use a gradiant and gradate from top to bottom going from lighter at the top to black at the bottom and in the black of the botoom show a profile of your city scape (like you have at the bottom. In fact why not put the title at the bottom. Also, if you insist on leaving your hardware washed in red, since your using photoshop, why not airbrush some reflected light on to the 'backsides to help give the pieces a bit more dimension )(like blues or greens). Or not,......