I do like the figure images on the right side but the close-up of her face just doesn't seem right. The cheek bones seems a bit 'blocky' and the face looks too wide. I'd suggest looking at some of Thorne's figures. They aren't done in anime style but he seems to have a very good handle on 'cute'. Taking the eyes you've done and proportioning the face more to Thorne's figures would work well.