I just posted a sidelit image of a beak-nosed male a couple days ago in a thread. ;^) The widow's peak hairline is traditional for vampires of the noble sort. You may wish to adjust yours a bit... at least so that it is less mask-like at top. I would slightly mute the bottom left-most tooth or add another tooth on top there so that the mouth doesn't look crooked... and clean up whatever is under his chin (too distracting). The image itself is quite striking. (I like this better than your first one.) In SEELE, tighten the spacing between the L and final E. It was apparent before, and more so now with the shading. I presume that they serve bloody mary's here? (grin, duck, and run) Carolly