Ignore the rude people. There are many more friendly people around here. In fact, if you want, post a bunch of WIPs in the gallery. You've got 3 uploads per day to the gallery, post whatever pics you feel like, so long as subject matter's appropriate (i.e. not belonging at R'otica). I like the pic. I agree about the bump on her top. Two things, in my opinion, could improve this a bit: First, you might want a better texture. Check the free stuff, there's TONS of textures. =) Second, the hair's pretty plastic. There are two main workarounds for poser's plastic hair. First is to do your hair in postwork, which requires a bit of talent for drawing. The other is to get a transmapped hair prop, such as Kozaburo's (check Digital Babes, he's got a number of good ones). There's nothing wrong with her hair, if you like it that way. I'm just offering suggestions in case you want more realistic hair. You're doing a wonderful job, especially for a first render. =) Rosh