Forum: Carrara


Subject: 'hood (take two) WIP

bh404 opened this issue on Feb 03, 2004 ยท 10 posts


mdesmarais posted Tue, 03 February 2004 at 9:46 AM

Wow! Big improvements! Very nice. I agree that the 'cans (and bags) look a bit large- maybe bring the whole batch down to about 60-70%? Love the shadows of the wires- maybe a bit more bump on the brick buildings to break the shadows up a bit- they are a little too perfect right now. Maybe dull the dumpster down a shade or two.... I had trouble distinguishing what that white shape was- a broken sign? I think because it lines up with the window right behind it. Maybe some reversed lettering (we are seeing the back side, right?) would make it a little clearer? Or move it or the window? Markd