Would this not work better if the ramp up to the centre dwelling was actually the top of a sloping bit of ground? In other words, create a mound and form a ramp on the top of it........

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All the Woes of a World by Jonathan Icknield aka The Bryster

And in my final hours - I would cling rather to the tattooed hand of kindness - than the unblemished hand of hate...