Very nice job! You got not only the primary movements but subtle secondary movements as well. Great job also on the audio. That's so often neglected but you've used it well. Suggestions: 1). It may be a good idea to show at least a little blood. 2). Continue the story - you've got my attention and I want to see what happens next!!!!! ;-)

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