So far, the setup and placement of the characters is excellent - the atmosphere and textureing is great right now as well. I would really like to see this with maybe a more extreme POV - try to make the monster and the spider the focus, the space around the right of the pillar and the space between the bottom of the pic and his feet kind of kill the action. I would zoom in a bit, bring the camera closer an maybe pan down a little, cut off the ground at the bottom, maybe even roll the camera to make a sense of action. I would also cut off the area to the right, by rotating the camera to the left and bringing it foward a bit, but thats just one way you could do it. This looks awesome right now, again, the placement is excellent, but i really think making them and the action more of the focus thru the POV will bring out all the work youve done on the characters---this pic has massive potential. (sorry to go into ultra-crit mode there, but I like the pic too much to keep my mouth shut:)) cant wait to see what you do with it, and remeber thats just my 2 cents Jordan