unzipped opened this issue on Apr 13, 2004 ยท 22 posts
SamTherapy posted Tue, 13 April 2004 at 11:59 AM
Overall, both pages are well layed out and reasonably clear. The things I don't like are the lighting of the model's face on the first page. It looks too dark for the overall lighting situation. The second page is lacking ground shadows, or at least, if they are there, they are far too indistinct. Again, the faces look too dark.
Coppula eam se non posit acceptera jocularum.