Most of what I have to say has been said. I agree with whoever it was about the shadow on the speech balloons, they're way too fat, actually I would completely lose them, the text is also very big actually I think the text (and speech bubbles) takes up too much space. I don't do comics myself, but I'll point you to an example with varying speech/text balloons and boxes that I think works great, right HERE Granted, the author calls it a "graphic novel" and not a webcomic, I'm not sure of the difference, but ok, Sadie is certainly not FUNNY, so it may be the reason why it's not a "comic"... dunno. It also uses a photoshop filter to make it look less like renders, but that's a choice to make, what style you prefer :o)

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