Thanks I am English but have lived in Sweden for24 years so my English does get rusty. Had to learn Swedish. One thing this wa written as a sort of test for ananimation series I am producing for Tv. My own production tat amselling to Tv.The frst in a series of 6. So there is a treatment and a proper shooting list. Thanks for your comments. Sometimes we become blinded to our own faults. Mavros