One thing that looks wrong to me (it's probably just me, but..), is the way the lance is (or appears to be) being held. Jousting lances are usually held somewhere near the middle (for balance) so there should be nearly as much sticking out behind as in front. The lance is held between the arm and the body, with the upper arm also gripping the arm. Just my 2p worth:-) I like the style! Cheers, Diolma