One of the great characteristics of comics is their odd and unusual and dynamic camera angles (as mentioned). So you might want to experiment with that a little more. Other than that, I like this. I think it's pretty interesting. I LOVE her face. Yeah, it's an odd face, but it's got character and makes me care a little more about the character because she's clearly not a mannequin woman. And hooray that she hasn't got enormous breasts, too. ;) bonni

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