Kageboshi opened this issue on Oct 06, 2000 ยท 13 posts
Larry F posted Sat, 07 October 2000 at 1:09 AM
Looks to me like you have the "Demoness" aspect of her going pretty well. I would say that you keep her "DemonessNESS" - ha! - at about the same level you have already and possibly concentrate any revisionary efforts of an attitudinal nature on making her looked just about like you're on the way to doing -- that being, kicked back, channel surfing, temporarily out of the work loop. You might want to follow a rule like: Strange characters in recognizable situations OR Recognizable characters in strange situations. For my money, she's a strange character. She's obviously a demon. Those horns on the table might fit well with the ambience of her kicking back on Friday nights. Just a thought or two. But devilishly nice work, I'd say. In fact I do say. Larry F PS: Come to think of it, though, Demons (and Demonesses) probably work Friday nights. Just look at the traffic.