Lookin good. I agree with the above comments about detail. I'd also add that you might want to get a good Mic and preamp for your voice work. As Terrence Walker (a successful indie animator if you don't know) Says: Sound is at LEAST 50% of your film. Otherwise I thought the camera work and editing were quite good. Personally I stink at pacing, so everything is just BANG BANG BANG hehe... looks like you've got an advantage there. I'm also glad to see I'm not the only one having trouble naming my movie. :D I've got 3 minutes in the can and still have no clue. Are you planning to use "Disk makers" to replicate your DVD by chance?