dethblud opened this issue on Oct 11, 2000 ยท 11 posts
AzChip posted Wed, 11 October 2000 at 10:17 AM
Wicked looking weapon! Very cool start on a scene. I'd agree with Marlon about the floor and blade texture. (By the way -- American English lesson 1: "oxidized" -- Marlon spelled it perfectly in British English) I'd suggest roughing up the table -- it looks like it's just been purchased at Smee and Blog's olde world table shop and hasn't ever been used. There should be nicks in the legs where knights have bashed into it with their armor. I'd also skew the benches; they're perfectly parallel to the table at the moment. You might even knock one over -- like when the blade went into the table, the bench got kicked over. Might drop in some backlight (light shining from above and behind the objects) to give a little more definition to the glasses. I'd also dirty up the parchment rolls. They look too clean. When I think about this era, I think "dirt, dirt, dirt!" But then that may just be my own personal little psychological malfunction.... :o)