shadowdragonlord opened this issue on May 18, 2004 ยท 10 posts
catlin_mc posted Tue, 18 May 2004 at 7:38 PM
A great scene and I love the POV, BUT, and there always is a but, I agree with Muddy there should be some sort of contact between the two, even if it's just an arm raised to touch her shoulder. Apart from that it's wonderful. Power to you Shadow. 8) Catlin