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You might like to look at the fonts over at blambot... they are designed for use in comic enterprises... and include display fonts as well as lots of text bubble fonts. I'd make two suggestions. Normally the eyes should be focussed upon whatever is being hit. If he has swung a haymaker, the fist would already be leveled. Since it isn't, he hasn't connected yet. therefore he ought to be looking at the camera, if the viewer is supposed to be the target. You can do this with the "point at" command, or there are handy focussing aids in free stuff. (Have the eyes point at a sphere, then move the sphere behind the camera or wherever you need the eyes to look.) IMHO, it will have more impact if he is looking at the viewer. My second query... where's the treadmill? Or treads? Or a runner? The image and the title don't sync. One suggestion would be to turn that fist into tank treads, since he is non-human anyway. Just a thought. Carolly