TalleyJC opened this issue on May 26, 2004 ยท 9 posts
unzipped posted Thu, 27 May 2004 at 1:37 PM
I think it looks great, and that the fonts and text work very well. A few minor suggestions. 1)Intensify the eye color, maybe brighten up the ambient for the irises a bit. Right now it sort of blends into the background. 2)Reduce the amount of texture detail on the hands and face. Those two areas look a bit too "rotoscoped" and are incongruous with the rest of the picture. 3)Deemphasize the eyelashes - it would make the character look a bit less human - maybe remove them altogether. 4)Increase the musculature some perhaps? 5)Experiment with eye and head shape to "dehumanize" the character a bit more. 6)Give the eyes a bit more squint/frown, and the mouth a bit more grimace. It'll make it look like he really wants to do some damage. 7)Go for a gradient in the background from red to orange - the sudden transition as it is breaks up the image slightly. As I said they're minor suggestions. Overall I like it, and think its an effective image. Unzipped