The lighting is where I see the native talent. You have managed to capture suspense and dread in your choice of lighting. It can improve in time with careful placement, tiny spots illuminating certain key areas, but overly all, when I look at the picture I know something is not right here, it gives me the creeps. That is a good thing :) There are artists in the large production houses who do NOTHING except lighting, as this is a speciality area. One of the hardest areas to get really great at, lighting that evokes emotion.