Like Michael I think this is excellent. I particularly like the tone and pose. However, I rather like the tattoo as I think, being a part of her and her character, it is important. The only thing that I have a problem with is the background which feels a bit disturbing. I'd have prefered a plain black which I feel would have balanced the composition more. Thats just me though, so don't take that too seriously. Once more, congratulations - this is fantastic.