Forum: Writers


Subject: Please give comments to my first two poems

InVert opened this issue on Jul 02, 2004 ยท 4 posts


InVert posted Tue, 06 July 2004 at 1:25 PM

Thank you a lot for commenting. And I am sure every comment helps :) The second one I left less focused since I am planning to put it into a song... what do you think?