Other tweaks:

1. The lower lip is too full and too wide.
2. Upper lip needs the corners to go down more
3. Overall, the eye need to be smaller
4. The eyeball needs to be lower, with "2 whites" showing not "3 whites"
5. Ears need to rotate forward more
6. Eyes need to move in more towards nose

other than that, nice work.
Also, the M3 head sculpty morphs will greatly help shape the eye lids. Good luck!

bB