It's an excellent start (maybe almost a finish)... but...(Sorry to be picky) 1. That eyebrow looks totally unreal to me. For real hairs I'd suggest a bit of blurring on the transmap (assuming that's how you did it); for "pencilled" eybrows, hmm... even more blurring? 2. The high-light on the left (her right) corner of the mouth is unconvincing. IMHO it's too straight and bright, and, being almost dead-centre of the image, takes focus away from what (as I understand it) should be the centre of interest of any portrait - the eyes. Ahh, well. Just my 0.2 worth. I'd have tremendous difficulty getting anywhere near that! Cheers, Diolma