vasquez opened this issue on Jul 13, 2004 ยท 17 posts
gammaRascal posted Wed, 14 July 2004 at 7:44 AM
purely constructive critisism here... overall i would scale her on the y slightly to give her more height. she looks a little stocky as is. i think maybe she looks too 'hip'ee' too ... like her hips are bigger than her chest (which i also think could use a slight scaling on the x) i would also, scale the upper-leg plate on the y and bring it more towards the knee joint. also, consider moving the knee pad. either higher to make it more a part of the thigh or lower and make it part of the shin. the point being, it continues the line between the upper and lower leg wehn you should break it so the viewers eye can deliniate the individualality of both peices. i think she needs a back/shoulder blade plates. her posture is pretty bad. most people, even with bad posture, when they stand straight, their trunk tends to lean backwards. (shoulders, colar bone) but this could be tough since it would require moving and scaling lots of parts (by the look of it). i know its alot but i really had to nit-pick to get this so its either good or bad critisism but purely constructive in its intent.