well.. right off the top, before i would touch anything else. i think the perspective is a little, um... leading... or can at least be easily perceived that way. if you can change it a little so the middle baby doesnt look like its pooping out people / or the person doesnt look like they are looking up to the baby a$$ or waiting to be pee'ed on, youd be on your way to a better image. a few ways to do this... ppossibly add a gradient barrier of some kind between the people and that middle baby. like a glow, maybe a volume spere or something. the point being, if you want to keep your perspective/camera position (along with the characters) you really should make an effort to seperate that very glaring bizzarness. also what gives credence to that visula is that none of the babies are looking at the people. they are staring off into the distance.. my guess is its the same pose with a few minor changes then exported. i suggest working on three babies in poser and pose them so they are a little more invloved with eachother, or the people - but at the very least, do something with their eyes. not going to talk about lighting or composition, i think if the idea is something youd want to pursue you should tweak some of the bulk of it first.